Ralphy-G6

Here's my 2nd song/poem from the few that I've started

Please do the same as for the other one? I'd really love it
Hope you like it :

Where is the burning flame inside my heart?
Where's the thought that could change a nation?
Where's my mind and creative spark?
Where's the soul that kept fighting?

Where's the love that used to surround me?
Where is the laughter that made me cry?
Where are the hugs and protected feeling?
Where is the soldier who never died?

The friends I've lost,
The time that it's cost,
Will never leave my memory,
Where's the strength to beat,
Unbeatable teams,
The thing that kept me going
But most of all,
The one who's fallen,
Where's is he?
The boy I used to be

Heyy everyone! This is one of a few song/poems I've been writing recently, I wouldn't mind knowing what you all think??

Comment below and stuff what you think, it's not finished and obvs there isn't any music, but y'know
so here it is :

"People say that we look great together,
They think that we are perfect,
Maybe it would last forever,
I just believe it's true love

You say that you don't feel it,
But you could never leave,
You say you're not ready for it,
But babe, you can trust me.

I love you,
just like I've been hit,
By cupids arrow,
You'll be free as a bird,
Just like I've heard,
I promise I wont be shallow,
You're perfect to me,
Why wont life see,
That we can work together,
You and Me"

A kiss would last forever in a lovers mind,
But it would last longer in a lovers heart,
A letter written, a song that is sung finds
A way to please partners so far apart.
Stories of Romeo and his Juliet,
Are told as if truth, but truth is not,
What it seems, get caught in it's net,
Can begin or end like a bullets shot.
Yet, Love can last forever and more,
A star can be born, one that is meant,
To be great, opening arms and doors,
To fame, and where fortune is bent,
A love that drives, a peaceful dove,
That is all due to :Love's Lasting Love.

"Pride" (chorus only)

The sun is up,
The day is here,
Gonna live it now,
My future's crystal clear,
So when everything,
Gets down around me,
I think of what I've done,
The friends that I've seen,
Cos of the pride,
that lives inside of me,
It's staying here,
It's what I want to be.

"So good inside" (chorus only)

I see you rise,
I see you fly,
It makes me feel,
So good inside,
You stand and fight,
Until the morning light,
It makes me proud,
To know you, tongiht!